The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderfully written and moving. Such a strong message for all of us. I have had brief contacts with broken people as Crelina. You describe those scenes perfectly. Your "answer" to her "knock" was caught me off guard briefly but was so imaginable.
God bless and keep writing.
What a beautiful story. Moving, and you placed me there. Your ending was just right.
Excellent descriptions - a "tsunami of trauma" indeed. This is really well written.
This is beautiful. The way you've written it, the words, they come together in a way that makes this one peice that will stick in my heart for awhile. I like how you took us along with the MC and showed us-didn't tell-what was going on, how they'd got there and the line that made the difference. "There is only one Savior and He is not me." That's a great line, absolutely perfect. Great writing. ^_^
I enjoyed this hopeful story, so full of vivid images and metaphors.
WOW. Haunitng and endearing. Loved this "Most situations left me feeling like my words were clouds over a desert. Full of empty hope."

Keep up the good words.
What grief we would save ourselves if we were only to remember this line: "There is only one Savior and you are not him." Powerful emotions presented here. Well done.
Congratulations on your EC!!!!!
***Congratulations!*** I'm really glad to see this in the winner's circle! ^_^
Beautifully written! Congrats on your EC!
Powerful story. Congrats on EC.