The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/08
Thank you for sharing your personal story and these words of wisdom.
01/28/08
This is something to keep in mind for the days ahead! I liked this cozy little glimpse into the retirement world-it is encouraging and realistic. ^_^ My favorites where where you wove in the bit of poetry and song lyrics, very nice!
02/04/08
You give the reader something to look forward to with your descriptions of retirement. A verse that comes to mind when I read this is the one about being content in whatever state you find yourself. You so beautifully describe contentment during retirement. I love this -- “RETIRED” to mean “RESTING FROM YEARS OF BEING TIRED.” That is great. I must remember that!