The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 535 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
01/18/08
The dialouge here is very good, I like the interesting setting here and of the hilarity of being socked in the face after already toppling into icy water! Ouch! ^_^
01/21/08
a pleasant, enjoyable and easy read - just up my street! Thank yuou!
01/24/08
I enjoyed the smoothness of this little Disaster-Waiting-to-Happen tale. She should have known when to quit shooting.