The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/08
What an effective way to get the message of the topic across. I loved your approach and your genuine dialogue. Good job!
01/18/08
For a moment, I wasn't sure if she was thinking about writing the paper or what, but when I got the end, you showed her clicking print and then I discovered that the middle was the actual essay. This gave me goosebumps reading it, how many times have I wished for the big house and designer outfit...when in reality, I already have 'everything'. Thanks for the reminder! ^_^
01/19/08
VERY nicely written! Great voice. Excellent illustration of the topic. It all becomes relative. I really like this entry. Thanks!