The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/08
Chilling. I like the verse at the end-it makes clearer the decision he will make. Our whole lives lead to a moment like this one-and we tend to think we'll never reach that point. One way or another, we will have to decide.
Your very intense story is, indeed, a chilling reminder of free will and the results of our choice.
01/20/08
What an excellent story for the topic! Wish I'd thought of it. I could feel his anxiety.
01/22/08
Chilling! I was a little confused for awhile, not understanding what the numbers were for.
The ending was great.