The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/08
What a beautiful picture of true, godly friendship! Thanks for sharing this great example for us to follow when we see a friend heading down the wrong path.
01/18/08
Powerful - and a very good job with "teaching" us how to tell the truth in love to a wavering sister or brother. Good job.
01/18/08
This gave me goosebumps reading it through. I'm so glad that she was able to see what she really had, a good, sparkling, sturdy treasure. Nice job with this. It's a light, easy read with a message that carries depth. ^_^
01/21/08
Great story, perfectly on topic.

Some of the dialog seemed not quite realistic--more stilted than the way real friends would talk with each other.

I love the transparency between these two close friends.