The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/08
Hee hee...I think I know who wrote this...and I can empathize! I wouldn't take the "partially obstructed view seats" either. Can you imagine having to sit behind a pole for a whole game? You make me long for spring training, and sun, and warmth! Just right for this topic.
01/19/08
Interesting take on the topic. Go ahead...take the seats. You can sell them later if you don't want them.
01/20/08
Fun and creative - enjoyed this. At first I thought you'd be shopping the day after Thanksgiving or something - but this sounds realistic. Cute.
01/22/08
I liked this story very much, and it was a good illustration of the topic. This is a line I relate to: This was a big day, and my emotions were flip-flopping from excitement to dread.

Great picture!
01/22/08
Good story! I enjoyed the preparation she made for the "big event!" (I wouldn't have taken the tickets either!)
01/22/08
I like the mis-direction at the beginning, and the double entendre of the title
01/22/08
(smile) I think the plural is "mice"...although is sounds funny to me, too.
I think it would have been a stronger ending if you stopped earlier.
good writing
01/22/08
Clever, light, and fun--my favorite bit was your warmup...really cute!
01/22/08
Oh no! I don't even know what I would have done. This was a great example for the topic. I see the point about ending it earlier, but I like the "here we go again" ending.
01/23/08
ROFL! I was laughing out loud here at this. The humor inside is just the boost I needed for today. I like the light dialouge and especially the detailed preparation for this transaction. A favorite of mine this week! ^_^
01/23/08
This is such a fun piece and right on topic. Loved it.