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01/18/08
Lucky Shelly, to have someone who did care and was willing to help her out in a pinch. Tough choice, but not really when you came down to the bare facts. The twist at the end is really good! ^_^
01/21/08
I can imagine all this really happened. It is not always right to hold fast in our hands what we have already got there safe. When God moves us on he knows what's best for us. Thank you for sharing.
01/21/08
Yikes! Scary guy...

The only thing I wasn't clear on--why couldn't she just ask all three of her friends for their advice?

Glad it ended the way it did, when it could have been so much worse...