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05/30/05
lovely story - and I can only pray there are more principals and teachers who behave like Mr. Stoker
05/31/05
Love the basketball scene!
05/31/05
Well written story, nice plot line, I loved the way it developed.
06/01/05
A neat example of walking the talk.
06/01/05
I have to admit I wondered how the gym could be empty for the basketball game in a busy school, but otherwise, it was a great article of someone taking time from an otherwise busy day to give hope to one needy little boy.
Very nice story. It was easy to follow. I even found it interesting how Nicky felt he couldn't trust anyone and was ready for the worse but instead received the best.
06/04/05
Hooray for godly teachers and principals - they can so easily turn a child's life around ... or not ... well done!
06/05/05
Well-written and a good reminder to always give love even when we feel frustrated.
06/06/05
 Very nicely done piece. What an inspiration to be a godly representive to a truly hurting soul. I learned a valuable lesson!