The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/08
Ohhh. This strikes me as being so incredibly sad. I was really, really wishing she'd stick up for Roger and at least, at the very least, give him her vote. *sigh* Great job though in showing the different choices. ^_^
01/18/08
I love your style; you've got a unique voice of a type not often read here.

I got a little bit lost in all of the names and people--had to backtrack a few times to figure out who was who. Maybe a few too many characters for such a short story?

The title and the descriptive paragraphs are wonderful.
Loved paragraph #2, so descriptive, so many unusual names made this move very fast, I too was disappointed in the choice, but understood the reason.