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01/18/08
How clever! What a great refreshing take on the topic of greed..! Thanks for a smile for my day... and a reminder to throw them all in the trash.... Dianne
I like the easy flow, easy read of this. Good message too.
01/18/08
Man, does this rhyme true with me! Catalogs breed catalogs, too, that is the sad part! Point well made and well received.
01/18/08
You've illustrated the topic this week beautifully and in clever, fun to read verse!
I like your verses with a message of how we can be resuced from greed.
01/19/08
Oh, how true - a clever piece I can certainly relate to. Great rhyme and meter too - a wonderful read.
01/19/08
Get the behind me, catalogs! So fun and so true. So many great lines..."Those catalogs, they trigger lust. They say, “You can;" I think I must."
Oh, I love this poem!! What a delightfully written piece and just as down to earth practical message as you can get! This one needs to be read by 'billions'! Great job!