The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/08
Your title begged me to click on it. Very clever. From a chicken suit to New York. Would love to know how the risk paid off...
01/18/08
Really excellent dialog--well-written, authentic, and it pulled me along.
01/21/08
I clicked on this one to see if you had typoed Bigg.
The conversation carried the story very well. It only tripped when Mark mentioned the band. That was a minor trip.
Your story is a good lead to more action. I can see the group replacing him with Crazy Jake and hitting the big time anyway.
Enjoyed this one.