The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story demonstrates very well how often we might miss the opportunity right before us to be a good witness as we go in other directions.
01/19/08
Great job on the topic. All that time he could have spent witnessing on Jerry he wasted on others who were clearly not interested. Yet, turned out OK in the end. (A couple of typos: 'inhaled the morning [air] filling' and exited, not existed.)
01/19/08
Great descriptions throughout - a bit heavy on exclamation points and "little errors," but a thought-provoking read for sure.
I enjoyed your story, and liked your creative title.
It is awesome to see what God can do when we are pursuing our own agendas. Scripture speaks of the angels rejoicing, but it makes sense that Satan and his demons would also react. Thanks for the reminder to do all I can to make them scream.