The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
I like your repeated phrase and I like how you didn't state what happened in your past. That was cleverly written, left us hanging. Vrey good. I really like your title, too. Great job!
Laury
01/10/08
Loved your title and how it fit in with the phrase of "if you really loved him." That was so neat! I think we go through some phases like that and it was nice to see how she turned to the Lord and searched for the answers there. Good job. ^_^
01/13/08
Powerful piece - I love the repeated refrain. Well done.
01/13/08
Creative approach to the topic. Engaging.
01/15/08
This is good, no, better than good - this has to be my favorite on the topic. Well, written, insightful and introspective. Thanks.
01/15/08
Love this story-but, oh, how I wanted to hear the conversation that was to come! I like the character and her attempt to stop the Holy Spirit from confronting her about her deceit of omission. God's ways do tend to keep our relationships from unraveling; we just have to learn to listen to Him! Right on topic.
Congratulation on your win. Excellent writing.
So close to home, so many regrets, when the truth would have served better, thans for sharing and congrats!