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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Illustrate the meaning of “A Stitch in Time Saves Nine” (without using the actual phrase or literal example). (01/03/08)

TITLE: Soaping the Pot
By Sharlyn Guthrie
01/09/08


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“Always soap the bottom of a pan before putting it on the fire,” the wilderness guide instructed his less-than-rapt audience.

“What’s that do, make the fire purtier?” Slade’s comment evoked guffaws from his inner-city buddies who, like him, felt out of place in the Canadian wilderness.

“He who speaks first rests last,” the guide quipped, handing Slade the soap and skillet.

Slade cursed under his breath, but grabbed the skillet and began spreading the slimy substance over its outer surface.

“Swearing just earned you the title of dishwasher tonight, too.”

George, the boys’ counselor, had been silently observing, but dramatically retrieved a green pot scrubber from his hip pocket. “Soap the skillet, Slade. But leave the pasta pot to me. This wonder-scrubber can scrape the warts off a toad. If my scrubber doesn’t clean the un-soaped pasta pot quicker than you clean your soaped skillet, I’ll do the remaining dishes. Otherwise, they’re all yours.”

The guide couldn’t help smirking as George shook on the deal and smugly plunked his pot on the grate.

Experience had taught George that intervention was more than a long-range goal for this edgy group. It was a minute by minute effort. His quick thinking had eased the tension and prevented a situation from escalating. It was one reason why he was successful with at-risk teens.

George had earned the boys’ trust and respect, but their hearts were iron-clad. “Father, melt their hearts. Help me show them their need,” was George’s constant prayer. It was also his purpose in bringing them to the wilderness –far from broken homes and filthy streets, disconnected from cell phones, drug dealers, and i-pods.

Meal preparation continued under the guide’s direction. Soon all were engaged in raucous banter as they performed their assigned tasks. The meal didn’t look half-bad, and since it was the only offering, no one turned it down.

“Now for the pot scrubbing test. Observe.” George whipped out the scrubber and straddled a rock. He confidently began to scrub.

“Hey, man! What happened to ready, set, go?” Slade grabbed the skillet and dishrag.

The contest didn’t last long. Much to his surprise, Slade’s rag wiped a clean swath with each swipe over the skillet. George, meanwhile, grimaced and grunted as he scrubbed his pot, with little to show for his effort.

Slade slapped out a victory beat on the gleaming skillet’s bottom. The others began to chant. “Soap’s cool. Slade’s no fool…”

It was dark by the time George finished the dishes. His muscles ached; his hands were raw; and the blackened pot would never be the same. But God had spoken to him through the sweat and the grime. Maybe this was the message that would soften the boys’ hearts.

“Guess I deserved to do dishes tonight,” George admitted, rolling down his shirtsleeves. “My own stubborn pride is what did me in. I did learn something, though. Soaping a pot saves a whole lot of work.”

The boys chuckled and George grinned. “It made me realize that you guys are a lot like these pots.” He let their jeers and snickers fade before continuing. “You’re all headed for a fire of some kind or another. Some of you are already feeling it. Alex here has to work after school just to help his mom buy groceries. Jaydon’s dad died of AIDS two months ago. The fire is something different for each of you, but you’re all going to face it.”

“I can’t put out the fire, but I can offer you soap.” George raised the bottle of soap with one hand. “The soap is Jesus. I’m offering Him to you tonight just as I have many times before. He simply asks you to choose Him. He has already done the rest. He died so that you could live. He lives again to go with you through the fire. Will you still stubbornly insist on doing it your own way? Or will you let Jesus shield you from the darkness of this world? Will you soap the pot?”

George bowed his head. His shoulders heaved, betraying his emotions. Just then the bottle of soap was removed from his hand. He watched incredulously as Slade bowed his head over the soap. Then the next young man reached for it, and the next. Slowly, silently, it made its way through the entire group.

To an unenlightened observer such reverence for soap might have seemed an odd expression of faith, but to George it was perfect.


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Karen Wilber 01/10/08
City girl here didn't know about soaping pots so I learned something new. Even better I love how you tied the story's beginning with the powerful message. I felt like I was there watching the drama unfold. This is excellent!
Sara Harricharan 01/10/08
I like the feel of light suspense and the characters, that are so real. I could relate to them. This was great.
Verna Cole Mitchell 01/10/08
This wonderful story is one of my favorites this week. The tender conclusion put a big lump in my throat.
Lynda Schultz 01/10/08
The end result was well worth doing the dishes for. Great job.
Rita Garcia01/11/08
'soaps cool' and so is your storytelling, great take on the topic!
Catrina Bradley 01/13/08
Excellent! I love George. What a great illustration of Jesus' protection from the fires of life. Super job.
Peter Stone01/14/08
Wow, what an amazing take on the topic. That soaping a pot can turn into a great evangelistic tool is amazing.
Betty Castleberry01/14/08
Excellent illustration of the topic, and a very good message. I also learned somethingg. I had no clue about soaping a pot. Well done.
Sheri Gordon01/14/08
This is a great lesson -- in so many ways. I've camped all my life, and never knew the soap trick. Thanks. :)

And very good illustration of the topic.
LauraLee Shaw01/14/08
I love it that you took an everyday, yet unfamiliar illustration to approach the topic. I learned a lot!
Ann Renae Hair01/14/08
Great story.
I think you could leave out the guide smirking part of that line...he wasn't mentioned again and it threw me off a little.
I felt like I was there...very descriptive message of hope.
Catherine Pollock01/14/08
Great story - wonderful illustration of the topic that has yet to become tired.
Jan Ackerson 01/14/08
Perfect--entertaining to read, right on topic, and with a super lesson. I love this entry.
Janice Cartwright01/14/08
I liked the lesson tucked into the lesson and how you used it to keep on topic.

Actually - were there 3 lessons? The practical lesson of the soap, the soap/stitch in time topic lesson, and the analogy of Jesus/salvation to soap. Wow!
Holly Westefeld01/14/08
This was my absolute favorite in Masters this week. Perhaps I am reading in more than you intended, but my impression was that George knew what the outcome of the contest would be, and that the Holy Spirit showed him how being a living sacrifice would reach the boys. This story has so much depth, and I prefer subtlety in presenting the theme, rather than being beaten over the head with it.
Temple Miller01/14/08
What a great imagination! I loved the way George was humble and wise - willing to appear humbled by a mistake in order to make a point with the boys. I love this story!
Debbie Wistrom01/14/08
Thans for the hint, otherwise, I'd be poorer not having read this piece. Honest to goodness idea here. Thanks for the details.
Dee Yoder 01/14/08
I didn't know that about soaping the pot, either! Your character, George, is super and I love the direction the story took at the end.
Linda Watson Owen01/14/08
Yep, perfect!! In every way! Loved it!
Beth LaBuff 01/16/08
Your illustration and writing are perfect. I love this line, “I can’t put out the fire, but I can offer you soap.” (I learned something too from reading this.) Thanks! :)
Patty Wysong01/16/08
Superb! This is Excellent--not only did you nail the topic, you included a lesson, and best of all, the Gospel. Wow, what a combination. The pov added alot to the story. This is my favorite this week! :-)