The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
Excellent! I love this the way you sweep us along in the story and then a new weapon and a new Christian!
Love the way the story unfolds and the ending is perfect. Great job!
01/11/08
Ooooh! I didn't expect the 'weapon' to be a Bible! Very good suspense here, I like the twist at the end.
01/13/08
You ABSOLUTELY got me with that twist. This is absolutely amazingly well written. I was absolutely engaged from beginning to end.
01/14/08
Wow, this is really good. Very well written, and a huge twist at the end. Very nice job.
01/15/08
I sorta guessed what the new weapon might be, but it was still a very suspenseful and enjoyable story! I like the tie-in to the topic, too.
01/18/08
Superb piece of writing. This really touched my heart.
Delightful twist! Thans for the fresh look at the weapons we are given. Top notch.