The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
A cute story! I liked the line with Papa bear wondering what they're teaching kids these days, that you can't get away with trespassing. LOL! Very funny, I bet this would make a great Children's Story!
01/10/08
This is a fun story. I mentally changed Jenny Bear's name to Teddy Bear and liked it better - but that's just me. Good job.
Unique, clever idea for the topic. I've never thought about the bears that might have come after "Billy!"
01/10/08
Sweet story. Papa handled the situation so very well. I enjoyed this new take on an old story.
01/11/08
This is outrageous. Where do I sign up to help get Hansel and Gretel out of jail?!!
01/11/08
Cute and clever - love this retelling. Great title, too.
01/11/08
Enjoyed this read from the title to the end! Cute!
01/11/08
Very clever:)
Laury
01/14/08
I enjoyed the pretend here. Delightful.
01/14/08
Some really humorous lines in this fun fairy tale. Good job!
01/14/08
I LOVE fractured fairy tales! This is so cute!
01/15/08
A sequel to Goldilocks?
Interesting twist to a familiar story!
It took a second read through the first part to realize Jenny was a bear.