The Official Writing Challenge
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I can SO relate to this! It's so easy to just put it off for the next day or the next hour and then lump everything together because it's too late or I'm too tired. Great story!
01/10/08
Hey! Stop spying on me! :-D This is right on topic and close to home. Even when we're pretty organized it doesn't take much to end up with disaster kitchen. Love the title.
01/11/08
Ouch. I can so relate, unfortunately. It flows well and is an enjoyable read.
01/11/08
Mothers are so smart, aren't they. Good story.
01/11/08
What are you doing in my kitchen?? ;) This felt VERY realistic, and was a lesson well-learned. I could definitely relate - perhaps too much.
01/12/08
I'm not sure why everyone keeps writing about me this week! What is up with that? You just described my kitchen! Very good story, very real, very believable:) Good message
Laury
01/12/08
We've all been there. This is a very universal interpretation of the theme. Nice job.
This is SO me! I could see her rushing around trying to prepare for company at the last minute because I've been there. Luckily my friends are used to my mess. The ending left me hanging a little, but I enjoyed your story anyway.
01/16/08
You paint a very believe picture of a house where someone is not attending to daily chores. Felt like the ending needed a little more closure, though. Did she end up baking choc-chip-less biscuits?