The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
Wow! This was a very good poem and right on topic! Excellent:)
Laury
01/10/08
Great! perfect rhythmn and message
Love the clear message in the poem...great job on topic.
01/11/08
Love the flow of this. The lesson is just perfect. All it takes is just one little, tiny spark to set a whole chain of events in motion. Great job with this. ^_^
01/11/08
Perfect--can be read both at the literal and figurative level. Very well done.
Great message and it fits the theme perfectly! Skellful use of repetition here to drive the point home. Well done!
01/13/08
An excellent message with depth beyond the surface. Like the use of repetition.
01/13/08
This little poem packs a whole lotta punch. I love the literal lesson, as well as all the different analogies that could be drawn to it. Excellent!
01/15/08
This is one perfect poem. You illustrated the topic in multiple ways and the meter of this poem lends to the drama as the "spark" builds. Well constructed!
01/17/08
Great lesson on many levels!
(Living near a heavily forested area I know how important this is). Wonderful thoughts! Thanks!