The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
This is very cute -- and Belle being 80 was quite a surprise.

I did stumble over the meter in a few places.

Very good illustration of the lesson. Nice job with the topic.
01/10/08
I love it! Yes, a couple of bumps in the road, but it's a really good piece nonetheless.
01/10/08
Clever and humorous with a message that fits the prompt. Good job!
01/11/08
Delightful - I love the rhythm of this. It is so sing-songy. A wonderful message too - and I LOVE that Belle was 80 years old! What a lesson learned.
You captured the mindset of a procrastinator perfectly. I loved the message and the rhyme. Well done.
01/12/08
This was great! Very funny yet convicting. ouch:)
Laury
01/12/08
I loved this. I am sending a copy to several "snow covered" friends. Thanks!
01/15/08
I really enjoyed the writing method. It moved me into your world and helped me understand your thoughts. I loved it.