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01/11/08
I love the repeating phrase of forgive-just forgive. The part with the puppy was great, I liked how it tied in with the 'unfinished' rift between her father and her. The last line was great. ^_^
This is so sad and you have captured the MC's feelings. A great reminder of forgiveness.
01/11/08
Lovely story of forgiveness. It's hard to think of forgiving those who hurt us, but the freedom is so worth the effort.
01/12/08
Beautiful and convicting.
This sentence is a great picture:
Realization and regret joined hands for Ann.
01/12/08
Poignant - and I love the surprising analogy at the end. Much truth here.
01/13/08
I like the illustration of tying the knot of love. Well done!