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01/10/08
Very enjoyable - and a delightful surprise ending.
01/10/08
Nice little twist at the end with Suzie telling the police her story! I thought that was nice. It reminded me of a Novel I just read recently! And the double-twist with Barbara being her cousin...nice!
01/11/08
LOVE the twist ending on this piece. I almost didn't catch it, but when I did, the whole piece made perfect sense. I liked the 'confession', it fit my view of the MC perfectly.
01/11/08
Very unique and enjoyable piece. Loved it!
01/12/08
Oh, how I love stories that make me feel like I'm in the middle of a tv show. This was a clever and creative piece in every way.
01/12/08
Cute - the ending definitely took me by surprise. If I had written this, I probably would have left poor Suzie in the precinct - but your ending certainly brought hope.
01/14/08
The variety in this week's entries really amazes me--this is still another example of outstanding originality and creativity.
01/14/08
I loved how you worked the dialogue with the narration. It flowed well. I loved the surprise ending, too. Very fulfilling read.
01/14/08
Very creative take on the topic. Good writing, and fun to read. Nice job.
01/14/08
Topic is perfectly illustrated. Yep, things can really escalate out of control. Loved the surprise ending! A fun read.
01/15/08
I liked the surprise ending
This brought to mind a novel which employs mistaken identity. It is The Proposal, by Angela Hunt. You might enjoy it, though it takes a sinister direction.
01/16/08
Enjoyed the twist at the end. And the way the character was explaining everything to the police officer was great and realistic. Good use of dialogue. Great story!
01/16/08
Aha, you caught me with your delightful ending. This is one of my favorites of your stories, as well as of the other entries this week.
01/16/08
Love the humour in this one. And quite a unique take on the topic. Good writing!
01/16/08
Loved the irony of this piece. You expressed the dilema of the first Miss Peterson really well. Great message here, too.
01/16/08
A confidently written piece!
This one reads like a skit...for a Women's Conference!
01/17/08
Ha ha! What fun this is. Great story telling! Great ending!
07/05/10
How did I miss this terrific entry? Your title hooked me, and I loved discovering the whole tale was a "confession" to the police! You are such a creative thinker-writer! I also dropped by to thank you for leaving a comment on my "Falling Waters...." story. You're so special!