The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
fun entry!
01/11/08
This may sound silly, but is Jackson a girl or guy? I had it in my head that Jackson was a "Her" but in the end, it sounds like a "He" when he volunteers to see if the violinst is free on Friday.
This was a hilarious entry. I loved the way you trailed the humor through it. Great job! (and great title!)
01/11/08
Yay for all the prepared people in the world! I am one who is often maligned by family and friends for being too "cautious". Love your story and title and the characters in this funny tale.
01/12/08
Love both voices here - a great contrast for sure.

I caught some typos (Sedrick/ch has two diffeerent spellings of his name, and a few other minor things), but nothing that can't be fixed easily. Great writing.
01/18/08
Congratulations, Jack, on placing 10th in level 2 with this entry. Great job!