The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
Profoundly clever. Good job.
01/11/08
Great allegory! I liked the comparison and how you made this real by having a map, destinations, etc. You made the whole choice come alive. I was rooting for her to pick something with lasting happines. So glad she chose the road to Heaven. Great job!
01/11/08
Awesome! This is really good!
01/11/08
Well, you got my attention with this marvelous allegory. I love the title and the choices and the characterization of the MC. Really good story and writing.
01/12/08
Although a unique, intriguing and entertaining read - I didn't sense the "urgency" of choosing quickly which would have spelled out the Topic more clearly for me; but enjoyed the read immensely. Very cretive and well written.
01/12/08
Creative and thought-provoking entry. Excellently done.
01/17/08
Congratulations on your 3rd place! It is well-deserved.
Congratulation on your win. Great job!
So clever and so right on topic, loved the delay when the conductor said precrastination. Very well deserved win, congrats!