The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
Wow! I love it and wished to read more! What a great illustration of the topic. It's perfect.
01/11/08
You settled on a time and place that's always intrigued me. This is a wonderfully engaging story and I love how it fits the topic in more ways than one. First class creativity here!
01/12/08
Excellent job with the setting especially - you kept me engaged throughout. I hope you will continue this - I'd certainly read it.
01/13/08
engaging,well written
01/14/08
This was very creative. I really enjoyed reading this!
Laury
01/14/08
The seventeen years between the beginning and ending would make a book well worth reading. I enjoyed your entry.
Reading Joanne's gems and am glad yours was on the list, I agree with other comments that much more could be made of this. Good luck and keep up the good words.