The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
Great lesson learned and shared.
01/10/08
Great illustration of chronic non-planning -- one I need to learn myself. I would have liked to see your examples given more detail. Great job bringing in some of the hidden consequences of unplanning as well.
01/10/08
Appealing character and ideas presented in this short entry. In fact, I wish there was more! Great message in this story.
01/12/08
A good lesson for all.

I'd love to have seen a bit more of this - maybe another scene, this one of her with the three p's as a contrast. Your first one is very descriptive - a second would only add to the piece.

Great details - keep writing!