The Official Writing Challenge
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12/13/07
I have to wonder, if you are right. What would happen to the established 'church' if it were to be made illegal. Would the church step up and continue to be the Church?

Good job! Hope to see more from you.
12/15/07
Very interesting read. Enjoyed the dialog between your two characters.
12/16/07
Thought-provoking story. The characters have a good realistic dialogue. The setting is described just enough to create a bit of tension about what's happening.
12/16/07
Interesting story. So glad you shared!
Laury
12/17/07
Very nice. Could use a little minor editing, but the message rocks on. Love the ending.
12/21/07
Congratulations, Catherine, on placing 13th in your level and 34th overall. Great work!
A chilling thought here. Good writing. Congrats on God's blessing on this writing.