The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/05
Loved the lead in to this piece. If it's true, I'm glad you ended VT Day with a smile. If it's fiction, great work. The story flowed nicely and contained a wonderful message.
Well done!
Blessings, Lynda
05/23/05
Well written, excellent message. Great work!
05/23/05
Good work. Thank you.
05/25/05
What I liked most about this entry were the touchstones of reality, things like the list and the example of loving parents, the way songs minister to us. I do find it hard, tho, to imagine a 19 year old guy crying all the way through Feb 14th.
05/27/05
Nice piece. Good reminder to wait for the right one.
05/27/05
Nice piece. Good reminder to wait for the right one.