The Official Writing Challenge
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It felt like I was watching the Discovery Channel! Great descriptions, and I loved your last line, teehee.
Great analogy. I applaud your knowledge of your humble subject. Good work.
Wonderful biology lesson, and alarming with the arrival of ol' eight legs. The way you tied this into the church on several levels was an excellent touch. I think that the first paragraph is perhaps not necessary, and the third paragraph would have worked better if used further down the piece.
I never thought I would hold my breath through the description of a BUG. You made this lesson so incredibly fascinating that I had no desire for it to end. Your lessons, of course, are also wonderful - and I love your last line. Just plain good!