The Official Writing Challenge
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12/13/07
It felt like I was watching the Discovery Channel! Great descriptions, and I loved your last line, teehee.
12/13/07
Great analogy. I applaud your knowledge of your humble subject. Good work.
12/14/07
Wonderful biology lesson, and alarming with the arrival of ol' eight legs. The way you tied this into the church on several levels was an excellent touch. I think that the first paragraph is perhaps not necessary, and the third paragraph would have worked better if used further down the piece.
12/15/07
I never thought I would hold my breath through the description of a BUG. You made this lesson so incredibly fascinating that I had no desire for it to end. Your lessons, of course, are also wonderful - and I love your last line. Just plain good!