The Official Writing Challenge
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12/14/07
What a wonderful article, completely captivating, and what a surprise that the part of the Church revealed turned out to be the Faithwriters community. And a realistic ending with someone else who had been there and could relate and encourage.
12/15/07
Now THERE'S a twist I wasn't expecting! LOVED this for many reasons.
12/19/07
What a lovely surprise ending! Some really great thoughts here.
You really got my attention with this one. I could relate to the anonymity of the computer. It's very creative, too.
Red Pen: Honestly, I couldn't find much. I did notice a couple of missing commas. Although it was one of my favorite parts and gave me warm fuzzies, perhaps the FW mention was a bit "inside?" No matter, because this is one of my favorites.
Your first paragraph drew me in. I wasn't expecting the online "chat," but it worked well, and I'm sure it's something many can relate to. It's a good reminder that we are the church, in every aspect of our lives. It's so neat to observe how easily "the church" can regroup (as in the case of faithwriters) because of our commonality in Christ.