The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/07
Your language is poetic and absolutely wonderfully descriptive. Much to ponder here.
12/17/07
This is good prose--it might be better to put it into poetry lines rather than paragraphs so that the reader can breathe in each sentence more slowly.
12/19/07
This is lyrical and has a peotic rhythm--I'd love to hear it read aloud as a choral reading.
12/19/07
I agree with Jan. This would make a terrific worship, readers-theater type presentation. I loved it.
12/19/07
Poetic justice here, I think. ^_^ This is great and well written. It sums up what we should all take a second thought about. Good job.
12/19/07
This all interlocks together so perfectly: title, message, and text. How often the pronoun they is used when it should be we.