The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! What a fantastic story! Intrigued from the very first word right through to the tear-shedding end! Great story, perfect writing and a good warm feeling left inside the heart of your reader. Perfect Title for a neat take on our topic this week. Thanks for an enjoyable read!
Wonderful characterization and descriptions. Not sure you need the last paragraph - I almost think it would be stronger to just end it with the men talking. Just my thoughts, though. A compelling and engaging read.
The little mystery involved through the story kept me interested. I like the way the old member of the church was continuing to pray for an answer. Good story.
Awesome story. Loved the intrique and it truly captured my imagination. Congratulations on your win!
Judy, congratulations on your highly commended story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
Congratulations on your EC. This is a very sweet, hope-filled story. Nice job.
So creative, so wonderful, congrats on the EC, well deserved!
I remember leaving a comment on this story days ago, but don't see it here. I loved this story; loved the ending coming full circle. Congrats!