The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/07
So much for the impact of Dan's enlightening interview with Apostle Paul, right? I so wanted it to end with Melvin jumping in the shower and being ready to go after hearing Paul's plea on TV. Oh well, like our generation is; we'd..."rather not". Tongue in cheek type of take on "The Church" I'd say. Unique and creative.
12/15/07
Clever - love the title, and the interaction, and how about that last line? Good stuff.
12/17/07
Sad, but probably true. Even if God used the TV news, people wouldn't pay attention to His message or believe it.
12/19/07
Clever presentation--would love to see this performed as a skit.
12/19/07
I loved your early dialogue's brilliant, soft sarcasm. Biting wouldn't have worked nearly so well.

Your characterizations are wonderful, and your plot is twisted just right.

Great story!
12/25/07
Very creative. Love your way of preaching that we should not forsake the assembling together as believers. There are more people in this category than many of us realize. Good job!