The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/07
Great descriptions and visuals. There were a few places where this felt forced, but this was a lovely story overall.
12/16/07
It IS a gift to see behind the veil of the earthly into the spiritual realm! It's a gift I would treasure also. I especially like the sentences where you describe the angels in the sanctuary.