The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/07
Very insightful piece with much for all to learn from. Great title, too - fits your piece perfectly.
12/16/07
I loved this entry! Quoteable lines: "If we were all one body, each of us individual parts with a purpose, it was hard for me to see Jack and Katie as a hand and a foot – maybe a hangnail and a blister, but definitely not the more useful parts." made me snort with laughter. "If I were really as lowly of heart as I imagined myself, I would not be chafing over minor offenses." SO TRUE! "I had to pray it many times, and my success with the living-it-out part was less than desirable."

Your voice is so casual, yet eloquent, and the touch of satirical humor gives your essay life. The lesson is awesome. Well Done! :) Cat