The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting experience. You definitely made me think about how we respond to newcomers.

I bit of work on grammar and punctuation would make this piece even stronger. Feel free to PM me if you'd like more specific guidance..

I enjoyed this - keep writing!
You're so right. We want to be "seeker sensitive" with the services, atmosphere, and music but forget that it's the people contact and the love and interest we show to new converts and visitors that truly matter. And, truly matter to God!