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12/15/07
You infused real terror into this story - I was absolutely at the edge of my seat. A powerful piece.
12/16/07
Wow! I didn't expect to read such an exciting story on this topic this week. You had me on the edge of my seat. Love the ending and the reminder that the Church is not a building nor is it supposed to be weak in the face of its enemy. Great story!
12/16/07
Well written, vivid descriptions which drew this reader right in. Full of suspense, this piece took a unique approach to the topic. Well done! :)
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