The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/07
Love the message of this, and the wonderful descriptions.
12/16/07
Beautiful descriptions of the church made me want to see it! I love the way you turn a phrase; tweaking it juuusst right to give a new flavor to the sentences. It's very readable and entertaining as well as meaningful.
12/16/07
How beautiful! There's such vivid descriptions woven in and out of every thought, luring the reader right into the MC's world. What a delightful story. Great job -- I love it! Christmas Blessings! :)