The Official Writing Challenge
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12/13/07
Very, very nicely done! And it also tells it like it is. I really enjoyed the smooth rhythm and easy flow. Great thoughts and creative.
12/15/07
Beautiful images - love the parallel structure (is that the right word?) of the first two stanzas.
12/16/07
It's true that the church's really the people of God. Good points in this poem.
What can I say? This is a beautiful message delivered in poetry. Well done!