The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
This was an interesting entry -- very unique and a very creative title.
Laury
12/07/07
The title is really an eye-catcher and so were the characters. I enjoyed reading your story.
Your characterizations are good. Be careful about changing tenses. Your title caught my eye, and the story kept my attention.
12/13/07
Love your title! This was so much fun to read! Your food descriptions are very good (almost too good, I have a cat and could picture everything you described :). Your ending is perfect with a great lesson.