The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
This was an entry that ended in hope. Very good. I felt the despair of this woman and I loved this little old lady with her decorated cane!
Laury
Excellent job of showing the emotional hopelessness the MC felt. I enjoyed the uplifting ending and the gentle reminder - in the older lady - that God never leaves us in despair. And the MC's name is perfect!
12/09/07
So many good ideas in this entry. I love the honesty of the MC as she has her faith tested through adversity. Love the image of the elderly lady, with her green and red bows, and her warm invitation. Enjoyable read!