The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
This was an interesting entry. Thank you for reminding us that in some places it is against the law to meet. We take so much for granted.
Laury
12/07/07
Good story! I was wondering why the song books were dangerous? Is it the singing involved? Love the characters in this story. Here's an example of a home group that's a necessity!
12/11/07
Good reminder of the underground Church. Some small punctuation errors (if you'd like an edit, feel free to ask--contact info on my profile page). I enjoyed the way you gradually introduced the setting, the characters, and the secret house church.