The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
Very nice. I like how you focused on this servant girl to tell the story.
Laury
Your poem flows and is easy to follow. I enjoyed your retelling of this story in rhyme.
I enjoyed the creative retelling of this story through your poem. Perhaps it was just me, but the meter tripped me up in several spots.