The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/05
All I can say is wow. :-)
05/23/05
Yeah.
Beautifully done!
05/24/05
Just beautiful - loved the suspense of not knowing why Daniel hadn't seen his wife in five years. Great story of faith and love, perfect for Valentines Day.
Blessings, Lynda
Beautiful and touching. Love and faith - they move mountains.
05/25/05
Ah, such love and faithfulness! Suspence worked well.
05/26/05
Beautiful love story!
05/27/05
My goodness! Amazing story with deep lessons enmeshed within it. Thank you for sharing this! God bless you.
05/27/05
Beautiful story!
A beautiful story. I didn't know where it was heading until it got there, and that made it a lot of fun to read. Congratulations!
What a tender story, Anthony. You told it well, and upheld the suspense through the use of carefully chosen words. Congratulations, and well-done!
This is a story that invites you right in.