The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/05
All I can say is wow. :-)
05/23/05
Yeah.
Beautifully done!
05/24/05
Just beautiful - loved the suspense of not knowing why Daniel hadn't seen his wife in five years. Great story of faith and love, perfect for Valentines Day.
Blessings, Lynda
05/25/05
Beautiful and touching. Love and faith - they move mountains.
05/25/05
Ah, such love and faithfulness! Suspence worked well.
05/26/05
Beautiful love story!
05/27/05
My goodness! Amazing story with deep lessons enmeshed within it. Thank you for sharing this! God bless you.
05/27/05
Beautiful story!
A beautiful story. I didn't know where it was heading until it got there, and that made it a lot of fun to read. Congratulations!
What a tender story, Anthony. You told it well, and upheld the suspense through the use of carefully chosen words. Congratulations, and well-done!
This is a story that invites you right in.