The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
Love this point of view - and don't we all need to have this girl's faith? Creative take.
12/08/07
AMEN! I wish people would apply this same simplicity to some other issues I can think of. Very good.
Love your POV in the telling of this. I could easily imagine the little girl straining to hear everything.
I loved this concept. I have a hard time believing a 6 year old could recall all the things like that, but the writing is excellent, captivated me, and was just a delightful read from the perspective of a child listening in and how they would describe the people and things being said. I like when the child thinks adults overcomplicate things. We do, don't we?