The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
I love your title, as "grace" has always been my favorite aspect of God. Gloria's story was inspiring.

Consider writing part of this again in past tense, rather than present, to compare the two. I'm thinking that past tense fits the mood of this story a bit better, but it's definitely your call...just an experiment in mood.
12/08/07
Definitely inspiring. I could feel her struggles and celebrations.
12/09/07
Very good and encouraging. I enjoyed it very much. Fitting title, too. God bless.
12/09/07
Very encouraging story, and the title is fitting.