The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/07
Wow--the tension and suspense are very vivid in this exciting story!

Each speaker's dialogue should be put in a separate paragraph. It'll be easier to read that way, and easier to differentiate who is speaking and what they are doing.

This was a great read--could almost see it as a scene from a movie.
12/07/07
Very adventurous home group description! The actions and the dialogue ARE like watching a small movie. Kept me hooked.
12/08/07
OK - I JUST blinked. So intense, amazing, strong.DEFINITELY out of the box. Incredible writing.
12/11/07
Intense. I was holding my breath all the way through. Very good.