The Official Writing Challenge
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Great writing...I am so glad the group went over to give help and not just pray...

Prayer is extremely important, but works best when practical help is applied also.

You get my (unqualified) vote...good job.

Ya gotta love, home groups...
12/07/07
Great entry! It is exactly what home groups are about. I like how the group went to help out the franctic dad, too. Bravo!
Laury
12/08/07
This was great. This is an example of a healthy small group, and some people whose hearts have blended. Great writing. Made me want to join this group. Not all of them are this sensitive to each other's needs.
12/08/07
Love the practical help - prayer can be a copout, but this is prayer with feet on. Love it.
12/09/07
A very true and honest protrayal. Thank God for prayer! God bless.
12/09/07
Perfect story with great dialogue and an apt title. Loved it.
12/10/07
I could feel the desparation of the father. Really nice story and good writing on this!
12/10/07
How wonderful! Exactly the way the body of Christ should work--and I like to think that we usually do.

If you even expand this (and I hope you do), it'd be great to have a few more narrative sentences in addition to the conversation, to really put the reader "on the scene".
12/11/07
BINGO! This IS the way Christians need to think, and act. Good job.