The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/07
Love the contrast between the calmness of the "regular" women and Nan's tension. A very compelling read.
12/09/07
Clever. Very symbolic. A fresh read with good pace. God bless.
12/09/07
I loved the understated humor. Good story!
12/09/07
Dub, this was very good. Is it, by any chance, a continuation of a story from months past? The William character seems familiar.
Laury
12/11/07
I want to hear the rest. What happens to William? Great cliffhanger.
I'm glad this did not actually turn out to be yet another Mary and Martha story. I'm afraid I found it somewhat hard to follow, with the cryptic references to William. Also, unless it were a dog guide group meeting, the chances of 100% of a group of the blind all having dogs is quite slim, detracting from realism
An interesting and unusual home group, for sure. I liked the story of William woven in, but would like to know the outcome.
Your writing always inspires me to push myself to a higher level. Thanks for being such an inspiration.