The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/05
How sadistically funny! Intriguing to say the least. Good job!
Loved the humor! Enjoyed your story very much!
05/23/05
Just brilliant! Some excellent one liners, VERY witty and made me laugh more than once.
05/23/05
great hook and excellent writing throughout!
05/23/05
Nice humor. Good job.
Wow. Not sure what to say about it--but it certainly kept my attention. :-) I think I can guess who wrote it. . .
05/25/05
Ooops! Good twist at the end. Goes to show you, it pays to be honest.
05/25/05
Yes, I think you watched enough "Murder, She Wrote". Very clever and witty.
What a trip! Hysterically, evilly funny. Please, keep those chocolates! :) A great read.
05/26/05
What a story! Great imagination (I hope it was imagination)!
05/26/05
Had me wondering what the end would be and I wasn't disappointed - well done.
05/26/05
Quite a funny story in a twisted sort of way! Imaginative writing as usual. :)
05/26/05
What a perfectly quirky (and rather scary) character you've written! Well done!
05/28/05
I'll never eat my wife's chocolates without a slight bit of hesitation.
Great story. Nicely done.
05/29/05
Very unexpected and a bit shocking. I could see this story featured in a woman's magazine.
05/29/05
At least you know your dark side is creative and entertaining! Well done!
A twister - moved me around emotionally but left me in a different place, pondering love and hate....and where does indifference fit in???